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The Perfect Life by NYTimes Bestselling Author Erin Noelle
ORIGINAL BLURB:
My name is Taylor Adams Bradley and I have the perfect life.
The perfect husband. Colton Bradley—the incredibly gorgeous, unbelievably humble, star NFL quarterback.
The perfect marriage. Our bond is unbreakable. His support unwavering.
The perfect career. As the recently-appointed director for the San Diego chapter of Mending Hearts, a child abuse prevention and treatment program, my daily reward is helping to keep vulnerable, innocent children from being preyed upon and destroyed. It’s all I’ve wanted to do since I was a little girl.
Perfect city. Perfect car. Perfect house with the perfect view.
From the outside looking in, it’s impossible to find a single flaw in my life. I have it all. Everything I could ever want.
But this kind of perfection comes at a price. Demands the ultimate sacrifice.
What happens when I discover what I've been missing all along? When I begin to question if the lies are worth protecting?
What if suddenly the last thing I want is the perfect life?
ORIGINAL BLURB:
My name is Taylor Adams Bradley and I have the perfect life.
The perfect husband. Colton Bradley—the incredibly gorgeous, unbelievably humble, star NFL quarterback.
The perfect marriage. Our bond is unbreakable. His support unwavering.
The perfect career. As the recently-appointed director for the San Diego chapter of Mending Hearts, a child abuse prevention and treatment program, my daily reward is helping to keep vulnerable, innocent children from being preyed upon and destroyed. It’s all I’ve wanted to do since I was a little girl.
Perfect city. Perfect car. Perfect house with the perfect view.
From the outside looking in, it’s impossible to find a single flaw in my life. I have it all. Everything I could ever want.
But this kind of perfection comes at a price. Demands the ultimate sacrifice.
What happens when I discover what I've been missing all along? When I begin to question if the lies are worth protecting?
What if suddenly the last thing I want is the perfect life?
After
The Perfect Life by NYTimes Bestselling Author Erin Noelle
THE BLURB BITCH'S REWRITE
(I gave her TWO to choose from):
TRADITIONAL
Perfection is what they see.
Perfection is what she has.
Perfection is the ultimate goal.
Taylor Adams Bradley has the perfect life. Everything down to her NFL star quarterback husband, her dream house, and her coveted car is sublime perfection. Taylor even landed her dream job, mending the broken souls of battered and abused children.
But there's a very fine line between perfect and flawed. Embracing perfection means giving up what she truly desires and betraying the one person she could always count on. The choice forces her to realize what everyone already knows: Nothing is ever perfect.
CREATIVE
Pretending to be what you're really not.
Expecting everyone to accept what's at Face value.
Realizing what you have is not what you Long for.
Finding your own courage and strength in All that you have.
Embracing your differences and accepting What you want.
Choosing commitment over passion and dEsire
Trusting your heart to lead you in the right Direction
THE BLURB BITCH'S REWRITE
(I gave her TWO to choose from):
TRADITIONAL
Perfection is what they see.
Perfection is what she has.
Perfection is the ultimate goal.
Taylor Adams Bradley has the perfect life. Everything down to her NFL star quarterback husband, her dream house, and her coveted car is sublime perfection. Taylor even landed her dream job, mending the broken souls of battered and abused children.
But there's a very fine line between perfect and flawed. Embracing perfection means giving up what she truly desires and betraying the one person she could always count on. The choice forces her to realize what everyone already knows: Nothing is ever perfect.
CREATIVE
Pretending to be what you're really not.
Expecting everyone to accept what's at Face value.
Realizing what you have is not what you Long for.
Finding your own courage and strength in All that you have.
Embracing your differences and accepting What you want.
Choosing commitment over passion and dEsire
Trusting your heart to lead you in the right Direction
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The Bridge to Fruition by Laurie Larsen
Original blurb:
Jasmine Malone has a lot on her plate. College graduation. Job search. New boyfriend -- a really handsome one who makes her heart race. Oh yeah, and getting slammed by a bike rider, knocked unconscious on the sidewalk, leaving a mess of bruises on her face for the most-photographed day of her life. Then, the discovery of a family secret long since buried -- one Jasmine is aching to solve, despite that fact that no one thinks it's a good idea.
Dax Murphy has always been alone in the world, but when he meets Jasmine, he hopes he won't be alone much longer. A new Christian, Dax has been praying for God to send him the right woman -- could Jasmine be an answer to prayer? But her privileged childhood, so different from his own, could make it impossible for them to build a future together.
The old is gone. The new has come. Can Dax and Jasmine find a new life in Christ?
Original blurb:
Jasmine Malone has a lot on her plate. College graduation. Job search. New boyfriend -- a really handsome one who makes her heart race. Oh yeah, and getting slammed by a bike rider, knocked unconscious on the sidewalk, leaving a mess of bruises on her face for the most-photographed day of her life. Then, the discovery of a family secret long since buried -- one Jasmine is aching to solve, despite that fact that no one thinks it's a good idea.
Dax Murphy has always been alone in the world, but when he meets Jasmine, he hopes he won't be alone much longer. A new Christian, Dax has been praying for God to send him the right woman -- could Jasmine be an answer to prayer? But her privileged childhood, so different from his own, could make it impossible for them to build a future together.
The old is gone. The new has come. Can Dax and Jasmine find a new life in Christ?
after
The Bridge to Fruition by Laurie Larsen
THE BLURB BITCH'S REWRITE
Jasmine Malone is about to jump headfirst into the real world. With college graduation nearing and searching for a job, she doesn't expect the real world to knock her out--literally. After an incident lands her in the hospital, she uncovers a truth about her past, a past she wasn't prepared to discover. Vowing to find the answers, she sets out on a journey of self-discovery and faith.
Dax Murphy has always been alone in the world. When fate puts Jasmine in his life, Dax hopes to never feel that sense of loneliness again. New to the church and Christianity, Dax prayed that God would put the right woman in his life. All the signs point to Jasmine, but their different backgrounds could be too much for even their faith to overcome.
The old is gone.
The new is come.
Can the two of them let go of the past and embrace the future with their trust in Christ?
THE BLURB BITCH'S REWRITE
Jasmine Malone is about to jump headfirst into the real world. With college graduation nearing and searching for a job, she doesn't expect the real world to knock her out--literally. After an incident lands her in the hospital, she uncovers a truth about her past, a past she wasn't prepared to discover. Vowing to find the answers, she sets out on a journey of self-discovery and faith.
Dax Murphy has always been alone in the world. When fate puts Jasmine in his life, Dax hopes to never feel that sense of loneliness again. New to the church and Christianity, Dax prayed that God would put the right woman in his life. All the signs point to Jasmine, but their different backgrounds could be too much for even their faith to overcome.
The old is gone.
The new is come.
Can the two of them let go of the past and embrace the future with their trust in Christ?